Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 16

Please review this page. Subject is the parent company of Plantations et Huileries du Congo (PHC) which just (May) celebrated its 100th anniversary and has had a wiki page for some time. The PHC page itself requires revision but I believe this page to be accurate and up-to-date.

Kinshasas finest (talk) 03:46, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks really great. Go through and add some intra-Wikipedia links to really common stuff like Democratic Republic of the Congo. That will make your article integrate better with the rest of Wikipedia. HypatiaX (talk) 06:50, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I created a page about Kimberly Estrada's work as an actress. She was Spokesmodel #16 on Deal or No Deal for 45 episodes and has been on shows such as: Lost, Heroes, Criminal Minds, Castle, and Sons of Anarchy. She was also named one of People Magazine's 100 Most Beautiful People

Ganzexp (talk) 06:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article about an actor and no picture?!!! Would be a nice addition, I'm sure.

Also, remove "new article content" phrase that was from the template.

HypatiaX (talk) 06:52, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first article and I want to keep it brief because there's not a lot out there on this organization. My main question are:

• Is this article too brief to be put out there yet?
• The organization itself is pretty controversial. Am I staying neutral enough?

HypatiaX (talk) 06:47, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,I've tried to create page but it was marked as Unambiguous advertising or promotion. Maybe you can make some review of what is wrong? Thank you in advance.

Giedre G (talk) 08:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have added this article as it seemed to be required for a full understanding of the following, pre-existing, articles: Local class field theory, Local field and Ivan Fesenko. Feedback would be appreciated.

Tomoliver163 (talk) 09:56, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Please could I request some feedback for an article I have written about ACT 2 CAM, a film company in North East UK? Many thanks, Steve

82.39.211.32 (talk) 10:17, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

suggestions and comments are invited upon the article

Rajeshbansalji (talk) 11:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Moegoog (talk) 14:18, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have corrected the references to this item, and they seem to be displaying correctly. Please let me know if there are other problems with it. Thank you.

Bookerjack (talk) 18:50, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Summary of article: biography of Randall K. Filer, an American economist and professor of Economics at Hunter College. He has strong ties to Central and Eastern European universities and institutions promoting post-undergraduate Economics education. Juble3401 (talk) 19:27, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

• The article is OK for a scientist stub. You might consider adding an infobox and a reference to his major publications. Netzakh[ˈneʦaħ] 15:37, 22 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have added an article on my husband, John S. Hoffmire. While 3 of the articles that he has written are online, I am a bit concerned that I have not shown the number of sources that you would like to see. Partly for this reason, I have cited the 20 or so articles from periodicals such as the Wall Street Journal where he is quoted. But if I am approaching this from the wrong perspective, please let me know. - Shelley Hammond Hoffmire

Hoffmire (talk) 20:19, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. I added this page a little well ago. Someone was kind enough to review this page before. I received criticisms about the formatting and addressed all of them. I think its ok now. Does anyone see any other issues. I know It needs a photo. I'll work on that. Recently the "This page needs to be reviewed" tag popped up at the top. Its already been reviewed so I don't know why it says that. Can anyone help me? This is my first article and am still a bit confused about how things work here. Any help would be appreciated. Thank You. -Andrew

Diggerbabydaggerbaby (talk) 21:02, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, my first article. had a bit of trouble with the links, hope its OK? Regards Zim.

Zimboro123 (talk) 22:07, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Elcapastor (talk) 22:25, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]