Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/December 2006
Chessington Community College: short. Rintrah 09:53, 4 December 2006 (UTC) Ditto. IrisWings 07:57, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Isaac Bear Early College High School Short. Rintrah 03:37, 5 December 2006 (UTC) And ditto again. IrisWings 07:57, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Bilocate Rintrah 03:18, 5 December 2006 (UTC); Done. IrisWings 08:47, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]First Chechen War. Scan for spelling, punctuation.SFinside 19:44, 1 December 2006 (UTC) & Rintrah; Done. -- PatrickFisher 09:05, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Carjacking | AndonicO Talk | Sign Here 14:59, 9 December 2006 (UTC); done. Rintrah 15:39, 9 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Wal-Mart employee and labor relations#Meal and rest breaks - Only this short section, which is mostly just a quote. IrisWings 07:03, 10 December 2006 (UTC); not a challenge to proofread. Rintrah 07:43, 10 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Vagina dentata#Anti-rape female condom - Only this short section. IrisWings 07:03, 10 December 2006 (UTC); well... it's different to other articles. Rintrah 07:43, 10 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Foam hand - Short. IrisWings 09:23, 13 December 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 14:35, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Master status - Short. Still needs expert attention, if anyone knows a lot about sociology. IrisWings 09:23, 13 December 2006 (UTC); that article is a load of - I mean it's done, I think. Rintrah 15:52, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Jann Halexander Trusilver 03:48, 23 November 2006 (UTC). Done. but the french article has a copyvio issue. I also switched some tags. --Sigma 7 19:51, 13 December 2006 (UTC) Based on additional research, I suspect that there's no problem with the french article, aside from lack of references. --Sigma 7 20:07, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Winnie-the-Pooh IrisWings 06:54, 9 December 2006 (UTC) No visible issues remain. --Sigma 7 21:56, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Telemarketing I see nothing wrong with this article. --Kyo cat¿Quíeres hablar? 01:10, 16 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]* Smear campaign - While I believe I cleared up the grammar issues, it may have some content issues. I could only do so much. IrisWings 07:44, 16 December 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 08:08, 16 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]The Soup Nazi - Just needs a brief look. IrisWings 09:45, 10 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 08:12, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]The Sword in the Stone (film) - Before Disney started to suck. IrisWings 05:31, 11 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 08:24, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Omen - Short. IrisWings 23:15, 11 December 2006 (UTC) Done! Galena11 08:33, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Anuj: Short. Galena11 08:00, 17 December 2006 (UTC) Done and lol. IrisWings 09:04, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Andrew Seeley: Short.Galena11 07:31, 17 December 2006 (UTC); proofread also short. Rintrah 12:40, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Racist love - Pretty short, mostly quotes. IrisWings 09:21, 11 December 2006 (UTC); I hope racists do not disapprove your work and copyedit it in a racist fashion. I hate racists and racist copyediting, and nonsensical, racist racism against other races. I mean, done. Rintrah 14:02, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]The succubus in fiction IrisWings 09:21, 11 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 17:28, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Element Girl Rintrah 13:37, 3 December 2006 (UTC); Wow, a suicidal superhero...you don't see many of those (or do you?). Anyway, its done. Galena11 17:43, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Splish Splash (the park, not the song) - Short. IrisWings 06:17, 11 December 2006 (UTC) Done! Galena11 18:02, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Pregnancy#Euphemisms and colloquialisms - This section only. IrisWings 09:21, 11 December 2006 (UTC) Done, but not sure whether to put the WPLoC userbox on the talk page, since we didn't do the full article. Galena11 18:07, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Yaoi It was more of a clean-up than a copyedit... IrisWings 03:04, 26 November 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 18:29, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Pudding - Pretty short, mostly lists. IrisWings 09:21, 11 December 2006 (UTC): Done! Galena11 18:36, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Pygmy goat Rintrah 08:22, 10 December 2006 (UTC); Done and OMG are they cute! Galena11 18:44, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Hunting weapon A short article. Rintrah 18:09, 8 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 18:53, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Charlotte Kerr Rintrah 19:36, 24 November 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 19:06, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Winnie the Pooh and the Blustery Day - Pretty short. IrisWings 22:47, 8 December 2006 (UTC)|Done.--Tohru Honda13Sign here! 19:16, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Donna Judge Rintrah 20:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC): Done. Galena11 19:20, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]A Night to Remember (film): Not sure if the plot synopsis needs a spoiler tag?? Galena11 20:00, 17 December 2006 (UTC); it does but someone else took care of this. Rintrah 02:47, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Fort (band) Rintrah 14:51, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
- One last change is replacing "EP" and "LP" with more familiar terms. While most people know the difference, the media is much more important than it's length. --Sigma 7 18:36, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I checked over this article - given it's a major change, it still needs another pair of eyes. The most major change involved the intro that was cloning too much info from 1080p but had red links. --Sigma 7 21:39, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Brody Jenner: Short but dull. Rintrah 03:24, 18 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 17:48, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Durham House (London): About a mansion which swapped possession many times. Rintrah 14:15, 18 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 18:58, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Disengagement theory: An outdated theory about people in nuclear families whose roles are determined by 1950s social segregation; it is only intelligible with arcane jargon. Enjoy. Rintrah 13:41, 18 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 21:03, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Yumeria (What an eccentric anime!) Rintrah 14:58, 1 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 21:12, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Premonición Short. Rintrah 05:56, 16 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 22:15, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Yang Xiu Rintrah 15:13, 1 December 2006 (UTC); Done! Galena11 22:46, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]Curtis J. Humphreys: Some of it is a little confusing, but the content seems the problem. It is ready for a proofread. Rintrah 05:44, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I checked; does not appear to have copyedit problems Hmains 20:52, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- No copyedit problems, but the style is a bit repetitive. --Sigma 7 23:04, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, Rintrah--I re-edited this one after you did, I think. It could probably use one more set of eyes before we call it "final". Also note: My style guide didn't have any guidance on Islamic proper names, so I checked related articles and it appears that the "al-" in this name (and similar names) is not capitalized, except at the beginning of sentences. If anyone else knows differently, please edit accordingly. Thanks! Galena11 23:30, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Hmains did a copyedit after this posted (thanks, Hmains!), so I think we're ok on this one.Galena11 17:06, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- That's ok. I was so confused, I didn't know what I was doing. The article needed a reorganisation, which I was too lazy to do. Rintrah 09:00, 22 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- looks ok Hmains 21:10, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- made some minor changes--done now! Galena11 21:50, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I do not see any copyedit problems. Hmains 20:58, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Proofread complete! Galena11 03:48, 22 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I made a few quick changes and reworks to one section. Call it done? - skrshawk ( Talk | Contribs ) 21:08, 26 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Works for me! Galena11 22:32, 26 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Gzkn 05:22, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Gzkn 05:37, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! This was a real easy one ;) Gzkn 08:35, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Gzkn 12:59, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Gzkn 13:26, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Could use expansion with those familiar with psychology. I bet it could be quite an interesting article... Gzkn 02:44, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- The article is nicely ce'd, but it's a wreck - I'll fix it over the next few days, but then - since I'm not a great writer - you all will have to ce it all over again :-) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:01, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I completely rewrote this article, since it was basically a stub with almost no accurate content. My prose stinks, so a new CE would be great. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 06:36, 2 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- It is redundant, and I changed it when I did my proofread. The proof is complete, but for some reason (I think having to do with the images in the article), all of the "edit" links that should be on the Level 2 header lines are down at the bottom and obscure the text. Does anyone more experienced than me know how to change it? And can you move this to the "done" section if you do manage to fix it? Galena11 04:00, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done Gzkn 05:15, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Done Gzkn 05:48, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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