Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 15

May 2019

• Military of Bermuda - A complete mess with no inline citations. AmericanAir88^(talk) 13:24, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
• Tandem language learning - Has more tags than a clearance aisle. AmericanAir88^(talk) 13:20, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
• Rafale deal controversy - Lead too short, too long paragraphs-which needs to be divided in sub-sections, not neutral. Justlookingforthemoment (talk) 06:56, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
• Al-Mustamsik - Poor quality English; mixture of Christian and Islamic dates; no sources. The article is so badly written that as a newbie to Wikipedia I wouldn't know where to begin with the clean up.MrsGussieFinkNottle (talk) 09:10, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
• Disney Channel (Southeast Asia), Disney Junior (Asia) and Disney XD (Southeast Asia) - Persistent vandalism and disruptive editing. Some users edit on these articles that are claim to be vandalize due to some programs aired on different networks such as Nick Jr original programs. So, I needed help on this situation that I request an attention to all users. P.S. This is a temporary... Movies Time (talk) 14:41, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
• Arijit Singh - Too many citations, Lead is too short, article is too long to navigate and needs to be broken into sections, it is unclear, confusing and some sections are overly detailed while some needs expansion, and it needs to be updated with proper grammar, formatting, sections, headings and sub-headings etc. Justlookingforthemoment (talk) 10:26, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
• Shrek The Musical - Trivial sections and very plot sections. AmericanAir88^(talk) 14:03, 21 May 2019 (UTC)
• Akhmadov brothers – Please write my article correctly, which I wrote using Google translator Lamberd (talk) 22:16, 16 May 2019 (UTC)

  I'll clarify for this user that the references for this work are all in (what I suspect is) Russian. –MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 07:13, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

• Michael Tippett - Intro is uncited and is poorly formatted with no template used. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Данјул Финеган (talk • contribs) 11:01, 16 May 2019 (UTC)

• Comment – The WP:LEAD section of articles often do not need sources because the lead section summarizes content in other sections of the article. If the latter content has sources, then citations are not needed in the lead. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 09:55, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

• Umvolkung – needs general overhaul (particularly wiki clean-up) and probably some more appropriate references.--Hildeoc (talk) 20:51, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

Partly done – Formatted references and marked dead link. Syntaxlord (talk) 01:28, 28 May 2019 (UTC)

• Madhurāṣṭakam - In the "Text" section, in the "IAST" column, the anusvara is written as aṁ, but the International Alphabet of Sanskrit Transliteration transliterates the anusvara as aṃ. This needs to be changed and updated to the correct IAST, for example adharaṁ madhuraṁ needs to be changed to adharaṃ madhuraṃ. EpicChefUK (talk) 22:15, 12 May 2019 (UTC)

June 2019

• List of animals of Long Island Sound, layout, bottom "footnotes" need placement, general clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 02:08, 22 June 2019 (UTC)

• Partly done. Sources in citation format that were not backing any text have been converted to a Further reading section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:03, 22 June 2019 (UTC)

• Dongding Island - This would be an interesting challenge for someone who does cleanup. The topic deserves a more professional touch than I can give it. I created this new article, and it's not a long article- maybe under 1000 words. I think it needs the touch of someone more familiar with Wikipedia standards for high quality articles- someone who does cleanup. I would just mess it up even further if I tried to clean it up. The citations are okay, but I think they could be better. I will try to learn from the way the article is changed to reform my style of editing. Geographyinitiative (talk) 19:34, 15 June 2019 (UTC)

• Partly done. Fixed one bare url. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:23, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

• Samuel Prophask Asamoah - Ghanian artist. The article has multiple references to commercial websites (eBay). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:45, 15 June 2019 (UTC)

Possible AfD candidate, actually. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:50, 15 June 2019 (UTC)

Partly done Now we have one more reference to go. Wynn Liaw (talk) 05:18, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Final passthru before the yearly archive. Fixed syntax and typing errors. Removed words of embellishment, removed remainig non-contextual eBay citation. -- WILDSTAR^talk 20:07, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Fairfax Municipal Airport - Citations are a mess and the external media table is in a weird position. AmericanAir88^(talk) 15:17, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Partly done. Fixed the layout for the external media content. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 09:50, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

 Done Did a passthru before the yearly archive. Resolved "URL needed" errors in citations, removed red links from references, removed duplicate tags. Additional cleanup contributors were PJvanMill, Tinton5, Tom.Reding -- WILDSTAR^talk 12:50, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

• Barbara Holdridge - I just did an edit pass to clean this up. Not sure what else it needs to have the terms of use warning removed. Actaudio (talk) 01:00, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

July 2019

• Stanford Department of Electrical Engineering - needs a cleanup (shortening) and references formatting. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:33, 24 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done Formatted references. --Syntaxlord (talk) 01:24, 27 August 2019 (UTC)

• List of proverbial phrases—Relies almost entirely on one source; little-to-no linking of the phrases to related wiki pages; references themselves are a hodgepodge of alphabetical and numerical.—A garbage person (talk) 17:56, 18 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done It does not rely on one source now. Wynn Liaw (talk) 05:23, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ross & Co. Dublin Cabinet Makers This one is a challenge. I salute anyone who takes it on. AmericanAir88^(talk) 15:18, 18 July 2019 (UTC)
• Nazanin Karimi - Iranian actress. Something is wrong with references there (i.e. IMDB film pages as references), needs a minor cleanup.

Partly done: I have removed the IMDb sources, because IMDb is not a reliable source, as per Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:04, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• GT Dave - American drink industry businessman. A possible COI contribution, but the person looks notable to me. The article, however, needs a bit of cleanup. As an example, I am pretty sure that the phrase "His oldest brother, Adam, graduated from Louisiana State University's medical school in 2008" should be in the article. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:26, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
• Hawaiian Falls - reads like someone copied in a corporate report or internal history of the company. Capitalization of "the Company" and overemphasis on legal negotiations lend support to this position. -- Damenleeturks (talk) 22:16, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done - cleaned up a bit and did a rewrite of "Hawaiian Falls Waco" (same kind of edits could be applied to other sections). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 09:27, 13 July 2019 (UTC)

• Jane K. Willenbring - a bit too many personal details and primary sources. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:42, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done - Formatted references, trimmed out some unsourced personal info. Still needs primary sourcing replaced/content trimmed. Grisette (talk) 14:31, 28 August 2019 (UTC)

• Criticism of the Food and Drug Administration - Citation format and error issues. AmericanAir88^(talk) 19:36, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done - fixed references 1 to 10. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:39, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

• Kimono -- an anon user from the UK has added a ton of content just in the past few weeks. This appears to be the same user as a known anon active on the EN WIKT, who appears to be somewhat obsessive-compulsive about Japan, and who is unable to read Japanese. They also appear to source from manga and other works of dubious academic quality. Much of their EN WIKT content has been outright wrong, with the occasionally correct fact mixed in. I suspect that much of the recent additions to Kimono require close vetting. I've done a quick pass through the Kimono#Accessories_and_related_garments section, stripping out patently incorrect "lit" additions to Japanese terms, and correcting their addition of the "hakoseko" description. However, there's a ton of content that I just don't have time to go through.

I'm an admin and editor mainly of Japanese entries on EN WIKT. Feel free to ping me for background on this user, or for any help with the Japanese terms. ‑‑ Eiríkr Útlendi │^{Tala við mig} 17:12, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

• Cleavage (breasts) - After a a lot work put in by a lot of editors the article is close to a GAN now. But, cite formats and other cleanup issues may become a barrier. Can someone lend a hand to clean ot up? Aditya^{(talk • contribs)} 01:42, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

Miscellaneous entries

• List of neighborhoods in Edison, New Jersey – some bare URLs in references need to be formatted properly. Tinton5 (talk) 05:42, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Fixed Tinton5 (talk) 18:52, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

• Raritan Center – some bare URLs in references need to be formatted properly. Tinton5 (talk) 05:36, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

• Fixed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 15:30, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

• Orphan BLP article Randal Teague seems excessively detailed, containing material that is unreferenced, referenced to self-published sources, and/or just plain trivial in nature. Later parts of it read like a personal resume written by the subject or someone closely associated with the subject (e.g. reporting authorship of what appear to be obscure committee reports, a long list of memberships in all kinds of organizations that nobody else is likely to know, that he and his divorced wife are on friendly terms, places he has visited, etc.). Most content came from a single-purpose editor indeffed for having a corporate name, and then a subsequent editor that looks sock/meatish. The subject may be too notable to AfD, yet the current page needs a severe haircut. Agricolae (talk) 01:32, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

• N Deleted per expired WP:PROD. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 20:46, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

• Tommy Smith (racing driver) - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed WildStar ^talk 12:51, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

• Brooke Ammerman - several bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 05:12, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed WildStar ^talk 12:51, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

• Jacob Galea - please help clean this up as it says there is a COI / Paid editing. But there isn't any clear evidence that this article was paid for. User Talk: Sanjida more

 Not done Page has been moved or deleted. WILDSTAR ^talk 13:21, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

• Jaipur Rugs – Presently has 28 bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 21:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• German football rivalries – Many bare urls in the references section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 21:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• List of Dahlia cultivars – Bare urls in the article body. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 21:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• List of modern equipment of the German Army – Several bare urls in the references section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:25, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed WildStar ^talk 13:13, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

• Salary of Government Officials in India - Contains 0 text (apart from the tables). Justlookingforthemoment (talk) 10:20, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

•  Done I think it's done long ago. At least it has text by now. Wynn Liaw (talk) 14:57, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

• Dorny Romero - full of spelling and grammatical errors. Only one reference. --Geordie (talk) 07:31, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Partly done - fixed spelling and grammatical errors, removed irrelevant information. werewolf (talk) 02:37, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

 Done It now have more than one references. Wynn Liaw (talk) 15:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ambroise Croizat – Needs infobox formatting atop. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 09:19, 1 June 2019 (UTC)

Partly doneI've taken a crack at it, most likely screwed something up royally. ThunderChunder! | Talk to me! | Walk with me! 12:40, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

 Done@Thunderchunder: Didn't notice any disasters. :) Cleaned up the infobox, references, text, links. - WILDSTAR ^talk 19:37, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

• List of New York City Ballet 2012 repertory - overlinked, minimal citations and formatting issues. Corachow (talk) 16:11, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

 Not done, nominated for deletion instead as I think this falls under WP:NOTDIR. Kind regards from PJvanMill (talk) 22:22, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

• Paterson Police Department - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 05:18, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:52, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

• Annabelle Lopez Ochoa - unclear citation style, bare URLS with titles listed. Corachow (talk) 02:43, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:53, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

• Akram Khan (dancer) - formatting issues. Corachow (talk) 02:34, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done PJvanMill (talk) 19:01, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

• Christine Shevchenko - this page is excessive sources, many of them are from blogs or forums. I edited it earlier this month to remove the unnecessary sources, but they were added again a few days later by the main contributor of the page. (I do agree with some of the edits) Would like a third editor to make sure the page is okay. Corachow (talk) 17:42, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done: The unreliable sources have been trimmed ThinkHat (talk) 16:00, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ahmed Mazloum - It says article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments, but i wrote the article because i know he is notable enough thecapitalking (talk) 10:20, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

 Not done - For help, please review Wikipedia:Conflict of interest and Wikipedia:Plain and simple conflict of interest guide. Thank you! -- WILDSTAR ^talk 10:26, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

• Please clean up the page Francis Shiner. It says article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments. This is not true and he is a good singer. Please help me with this. Thanks in advance. --Gayesh Senevirathne (talk) 04:49, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

 Not done - For help, please review Wikipedia:Conflict of interest and Wikipedia:Plain and simple conflict of interest guide. Thank you! -- WILDSTAR ^talk 12:53, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

• Noah Schnapp - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 02:45, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR ^talk 03:34, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

• Nabil F. Saba - clean up needed - COI edits. Andcentra (talk) 00:38, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Cleaned by D. himself. (Andcentra). -- WILDSTAR^talk 17:40, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

• Heinz Tomato Ketchup - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 01:52, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR ^talk 11:34, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

• Draft:Dan Margalit (mathematician): I drafted this article, but I have a conflict of interest (COI) because I was a student of Margalit. Because of this, the article requires clean up, in particular to ensure that it maintains a neutral point of view. Justin.Lanier (talk) 02:03, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed Russ Woodroofe (talk) 02:20, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

• Averie Swanson - one of the few US female brewers. Probably notable, but the article reads like advertising.--Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:30, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done Cleaned up by Rosguill, Þjarkur and Theroadislong. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:32, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

• Gzero media - US political news website. Needs to be cleaned up to remove self-published sources and promotional language. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:16, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

 Not done, nominated for deletion instead. PJvanMill (talk) 20:56, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

• Annie LeBlanc - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 20:57, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Partly done - minor fixes. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:07, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

• The article presently has no bare urls in its references. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 01:12, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• eBid - An online auction site. Reads as an advertisement, has a single ref that's just the site itself. Waxworker (talk) 16:15, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

 Not done, nominated for deletion instead. PJvanMill (talk) 21:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

Note: Closed as "delete". PJvanMill (talk) 15:35, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

• Junior Olympic Gold - needs clean up, there are no references, info is in the wrong order. --Less Unless (talk) 11:48, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

 Not done Nominated for deletion instead. PJvanMill (talk) 13:28, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

• Lazaro Matthes - 16th century Albanian. References have too much text content, which should be integrated into the article. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:19, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

• Article was deleted. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:03, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

• Jerome, 2nd Count de Salis – Clean-up required particularly regarding formatting / layout (excessive illustration!).--Hildeoc (talk) 18:12, 26 October 2019 (UTC)

 Done: Looks to be fixed ThinkHat (talk) 21:44, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

• Marcel R.M. van den Brink – Clean-up required, secondary sources have been added and accurate information but, I am unsure if it is acceptable to remove the banner. Is anyone familiar with evaluating the biography of a living person?-- Croatmonkey123 (talk) 17:26, 28 October 2019 (UTC) added by —KuyaBriBri^Talk 16:01, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

 Done ThinkHat (talk) 21:44, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

• USS Lawrence (DDG-4) - Multiple grammar issues, lack of inline citations, organizational needs --NawtAGoodNinja (talk) 15:13, 03 September 2019 (UTC)

 DoneThinkHat (talk) 17:04, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

• Denture cleaner - a couple of bare URLs in references used.Tinton5 (talk) 17:51, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:22, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

• Union Transportation Trail - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:33, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR^talk 05:33, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

• Jack Leiter - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:09, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR^talk 05:33, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

• Ludmila Pagliero - Overly detailed, reads like an ad. Corachow (talk) 12:24, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done The article is now more balanced. PJvanMill (talk) 18:51, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• Buffalo Police Department - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:15, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR^talk 13:16, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

• Ashley Nicole Black - a couple of bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 01:51, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done ---Andcentra (talk) 05:41, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

• Liz Katz - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 19:22, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:40, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

• Shereef Elnahal - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 19:19, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:40, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

• Amazon Alexa - some bare URLs in references and footnote # 12 needs formatting improvement as bare URL is found in title. Tinton5 (talk) 17:55, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:22, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

• Sprite (drink) - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 00:12, 7 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR^talk 11:50, 7 June 2020 (UTC)

• Institutional racism - some bare URLs found in both references and bibliography sections. Are pictures allowed to be used in a footnote..?Tinton5 (talk) 22:55, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed -- WILDSTAR^talk 15:14, 7 June 2020 (UTC)

• Dan van Husen - Three different death dates of the subject in the article. Mojo0306 (talk) 14:15, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Replaced all three by just "May" for now, following the example of the German WP. PJvanMill (talk) 15:29, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

• After the Rain (ballet) - formatting issues, the revival section is unreferenced, which I think should just be removed as it is often revived. Corachow (talk) 19:56, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done I removed the unverifiable contents and reformatted the cast list. Corachow (talk) 13:38, 7 June 2020 (UTC)

• Death on the Nile#Reception needs to be condensed. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 13:32, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Section addressed by ThinkHat, Sootikins, Prairieplant, Tetrahedron17. -- WILDSTAR^talk

• Fernando Sulichin - Argentinian filmmaker. Introductory section is poorly cited and overly promotional in tone. CRL956 (talk) 16:32, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done rewrote a large part to cite and reference correctly, update and remove any promotional content Miriumjenkins (talk) 17:38, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

• Simon Tian - Canadian businessman. The article suffers from over-referencing, it is also quite promotional. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:28, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done removed heavy referencing from primary sources, self-published sources and promotional content Miriumjenkins (talk) 09:34, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

• Frogger: The Great Quest - A 2001 platformer game in the Frogger series. Excessive fancruft, minimal citations, and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 21:32, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Partly done, still lacking sources. PJvanMill (talk) 19:40, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Per WP:CITEFOOT, the citation used at the end of the paragraph is sufficient to support the editor's claim and choice of words within it. Remaining MT removed. -- WILDSTAR^talk 15:54, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

• Police - footnote # 34 is broken/bare. Tinton5 (talk) 04:39, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Ghostofakina (talk) 22:18, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

• Ronald McDonald - bare URLs in references. Reference # 24 should be separate references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:35, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 09:18, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

• First Prudential Markets - Australian Forex broker. The article suffers from over-citations and has references to low quality and self-published sources. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:05, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Fixed bare URLs, removed some citations per WP:FICTREF, WP:REPCITE, and WP:CITETRIM, added Short Desc. -- WILDSTAR^talk 12:52, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

• Wessex Bristol (group) - UK private equity firm. Seem notable, but the article reads like an advertising and has multiple self-published sources as references. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:01, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done This looks to be a good example of the law of unintended consequences... PJvanMill (talk) 12:18, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

• Eduardo Vernazza - very long, overly detailed, not npov, needs serious style clean-up. Less Unless (talk) 12:08, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

Partly done - Fixed bare URLs under Sources & External links, removed links to unavailable YouTube videos under External links. -- WILDSTAR^talk 16:39, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Not long or detailed anymore, and the other problems are gone, too - I've removed all that unverifiable content instead of trying to rewrite it. PJvanMill (talk) 20:37, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

• Como - i added the climate chart template but i am not able to make it appear in the climate section; it seems i put the code in the right place but on my pc it is rendered in the following section (Main Sights). My screen resolution is 1360*768 on a windows desktop; at 1280*1024 is badly placed as well - user agent is Chrome but even using different user agents nothing changes. Same problem on mobile devices. If i edit only the Climate section and then preview it, it appears in the right place but when you finish editing it is misplaced nontheless. Strange Itemirus (talk) 12:24, 17 June 2020 (UTC)

Comment Looks fine to me. Nice chart in the Climate section as it should be. Maybe it was a temporary bug? Less Unless (talk) 21:12, 17 June 2020 (UTC)

 Not done See note below. -- WILDSTAR^talk 12:49, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

Note: Itemirus The MediaWiki software is rendering the page correctly using a Responsive Design Mode (RDM). The placing of images, templates, etc. when editing and after publishing can differ for a variety of reasons. You can preview your page using source editing instead of visual editing to get a better idea how it will look before publishing. There are advanced techniques you can use as found at WP:EIS and even using CSS to force a different outcome. However, because there is an inordinate amount of images in that article, expect things to differ substantially between various screen sizes. Consider reviewing MOS:IMAGES, and in particular MOS:SANDWICH for all the sandwiching I saw in the article. Sometimes, less is more. Thank you. -- WILDSTAR^talk 12:49, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

• Fall for Dance Festival - formatting issues, should be trimmed down. Corachow (talk) 18:30, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Partly done I've removed the bad stuff, but the bad stuff was everything, so it needs to be written from scratch. PJvanMill (talk) 16:37, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Note: Struck the above entry. At this point, the article could be submitted to Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:57, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Draft:Kevin Andrew Tan - This has been labeled as UPE. I already posted a disclosure on the talkpage many times already and yet it is still getting drafted due to the same reason. Not to mention, the talkpage is also getting deleted every time. Is there anything I need to do to resolve this issue and prevent the article/talkpage from getting removed? Liberma19 (talk) 01:18, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

 Not done Not a cleanup request, more something for the WP:Teahouse. PJvanMill (talk) 19:01, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi PJvanMill. This article has gone through Teahouse and has been revised and improved by some editors already. This should be for cleanup now. I'm seeking for anyone's assistance here to publish the article already. Thank you. Antagonizer05 (talk) 02:16, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

(reinstating my removed comment and re-striking request -- both of these users are socks of the same person and have been blocked accordingly. PJvanMill (talk) 19:48, 18 June 2020 (UTC))

• Schnuffel - A German CGI musician rabbit created by Jamba! (also known as Jamster), similar to Crazy Frog. Bare URLS under references. Waxworker (talk) 19:22, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

Partly done converted some urls and marked several as dead. There are plenty on the webpage jamba and one heavenmusic.gr that lead to the main page rather than the one dedicated to the mentioned pieces. Need help with those - what do we do in such cases? Less Unless (talk) 20:13, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

Fixed remaining bare URLs. -- WILDSTAR^talk 22:44, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

• Mario Telò - a lot of issues - refs, amount of information, style. Less Unless (talk) 12:23, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Note: not sure if this person is even notable. No inline citations; "References" consists of google scholar citation number, two dead pages on the site of his university, two of his publications, and a dead site. There are no claims in the article that would make him satisfy one of the criteria of WP:NACADEMIC, let alone sources for them. I will try to look for some sources, but if I'm unsuccessful, I will probably nominate it at AFD. PJvanMill (talk) 21:04, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

Partly done I get the impression that there are probably enough sources out there to write an article, but it would have to be rewritten from the very ground up. For now I've gutted the article. PJvanMill (talk) 18:22, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Note: Striking this entry as the work that remains to be done is not cleanup work. PJvanMill (talk) 21:44, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

• Charing Cross tube station - Recently rewritten, instead of condensing the article, the edit expanded it to a ridiculously long level, particularly the history section, but just in general. I'd like to see the previous version added to and clarified, but we're talking sentences, not entire pages of new information. The major expansion is not consistent with other articles on rapid transit stations. --Criticalthinker (talk) 05:17, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• Comment – Before people from this outside project jump in and change the article, I strongly recommend discussing matters first at Talk:Charing Cross tube station § Rewrite, which was initiated yesterday on 9 May 2019. Also of consideration is that the article was nominated for consideration to become a WP:GOODARTICLE only two days ago, on 8 May 2020 (diff). Would removing content make the article less likely to pass a GA-review? North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:26, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• So, I did discuss this the person who made the edits. There is no use to go back and forth with him because it was clear he disagrees. I honestly don't think it's much of a debate that if the former page was too little then the expansion is MUCH too much. I even left suggestions of how it could be improved. The length simply isn't consistent with other comparable pages. --Criticalthinker (talk) 09:25, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• I don't think we did discuss this as such. You made a comment that you though the article was too long and detailed. I made a comment that it was following precedents of other better quality articles from our WikiProject. I also don't think that WP:CLEAN is intended for the sort of changes that you are asking for. You don't say which articles you are comparing this one to, but, in my response, I gave some examples of other good and featured articles on our project. I only provided examples of London Underground related articles, but there is also London Necropolis railway station (GA), Herne Hill railway station (FA), London Bridge station (GA) and Quainton Road railway station (FA), all of which have long detailed history sections. I'm not suggesting that all station articles should be expanded to this level of detail - most of them don't have this amount of history - but Charing Cross tube station did have a long gestation period, which I believe is worth including. You commented that instead of condensing the article, the edit expanded it to a a ridiculously long level. Why is a detailed history of planning and construction ridiculous? As the previous version of the article was lacking basic key information, how could it have been condensed?--DavidCane (talk) 10:58, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Note: While at first I did think the history section seemed rather long and possibly overdetailed, on closer inspection, I get the impression that the length is not due to an excessive level of detail, but more to the amount of history that the station has. Everything in the section seems to be properly sourced, as well. That it is longer than articles on similar topics is not much of an argument in that case. Given all that, I am striking this entry as probably not needing cleanup. PJvanMill (talk) 21:51, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

• DN160822 03 – Lots of improperly formatted references and bare URLs. Also excessive usage of lengthy quotes and may require organizing into sections. Nrco0e (talk) 03:30, 20 March 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Converted urls, marked 1 link as dead. Less Unless (talk) 13:28, 24 March 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Replaced dead link with a new citation. Added subject of "over-quotation" to article's talk page. -- WildStar ^talk 19:52, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Trimmed the quotation and removed the self-published source.ThinkHat (talk) 14:46, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done Rephrased paragraph, added citations, removed maintenance templates. -- WildStar ^talk 23:09, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

• Steven L. Tuck - US professor. Promotional. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:05, 2 January 2020 (UTC)

 Not done Nominated for deletion instead. PJvanMill (talk) 22:41, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Note: Closed as "keep". PJvanMill (talk) 14:25, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

• Struck the entry. The article received significant editing during the AfD discussion to address this concern. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 22:41, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

• The Global 2000 Report to the President - This article is a complete mess, with bad overuse of {{cns}}. It also suffers from issues involving tone and a host of others at MOS:WORDS. Global Cerebral Ischemia (talk) 01:26, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

 Done, though I'm afraid there isn't much left of it. PJvanMill (talk) 21:50, 19 June 2020 (UTC)* Pier Luigi Capucci needs reference cleanup (i've done partly) and there is a section "Some texts on the Web" - should it be transformed in to a External links? --Less Unless (talk) 16:05, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

Partly done Cleaned up some of these external links. More clean up is needed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:19, 5 January 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Fixed bare URLs, replaced IBX incorrect field, flagged dead links, moved links under "Some texts on the Web" to "Further reading". -- WILDSTAR^talk 03:42, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

• Pinehouse Photography Club requesting clean up and additional information/perspectives/suggestions--Dreerwin (talk) 03:19, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

Partly done Formatted refs to avoid doublingLess Unless (talk) 11:19, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

Thank you very much! Im flagged by a certain someone that Im coi writting article about this club. Does anyone who how to fix this? She's told me Im not allowed to touch the article anymore

Note: striking this entry - the article was speedy-deleted for copyright violation, Dreerwin was blocked for socking and a new article was written that looks good. PJvanMill (talk) 20:09, 19 June 2020 (UTC)

• North American fur trade - Tons of tags and in need of a reworking. AmericanAir88^(talk) 16:40, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

 Done by Tribe of Tiger. PJvanMill (talk) 20:19, 19 June 2020 (UTC)

• Governorship of Phil Murphy - bare URLs used in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:45, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 13:21, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

• New Jersey house - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:10, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:53, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

• Sam Rockwell - bare URL in reference. Tinton5 (talk) 23:19, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

Fixed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 01:58, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

• The Attic (restaurant) – Would benefit from reference formatting. The article presently has an intermingling of bare urls with text in its references. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 20:04, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done — WILDSTAR^talk 01:41, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

• George Floyd protests in New Jersey - a couple of bare URLs in references as well as wording/grammar needs some clean up throughout page, specifically in the “Lakewood” and “Willingboro” sub-sections. Tinton5 (talk) 06:24, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:03, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• Richard Scheller- Article contains bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^talk 22:06, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:03, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• David Gauntlett - Article contains bare URLs, citation overkill, and embedded links. — WILDSTAR^talk 21:48, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Removed embedded links, trimmed citations. ThinkHat (talk) 14:27, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:03, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• Fountain Valley, California - Article contains bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^talk 21:22, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

: Done one remaining url is a dead link.Less Unless (talk) 16:07, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• DJ Daryl - the article has several issues, the list of links should be reviewed and transformed into both refs and external links. Less Unless (talk) 20:39, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
• VSCO girl - Is not written like an encyclopedia article, perpetutates the sterotype that it describes with mentioning origin, use, etc. Needs a FULL rewrite. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 17:27, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

 Not done. P,TO 19104, a rewrite request goes beyond the scope of this project, and may well be more suited for WP:GOCER. — WILDSTAR^talk 22:33, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

WildStar, I've un-struck this entry because looking at the page, I do not think it needs to be rewritten from scratch. PJvanMill (talk) 22:46, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• Note: The article has already been submitted to WP:GOCER. — WILDSTAR^talk 18:03, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

• Washington Park (Newark) - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 08:11, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed bare URLs, spelling and syntax errors. -- WILDSTAR^talk 12:39, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Robin Williams - a couple of bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:42, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed bare URLs, reduced number of duplicate links, added Reference, removed CN tag. -- WILDSTAR^talk 15:41, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

• Christoph Wulf -the article reads like a research paper - too long, too many details - not readable. Less Unless (talk) 13:18, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Long story short: there was a copyvio, I overreacted and did some stupid things, but in the end the article was fixed. PJvanMill (talk) 12:04, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

• Donald Trump 2020 presidential campaign - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 00:23, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 21:04, 17 June 2020 (UTC)

• A Mind Forever Voyaging - A 1985 text adventure game by Infocom with a strong political theme. Excessive fancruft in the form of an excessively long plot description and reads as being written by a fan. It also has formatting issues, and a lack of inline citations. Waxworker (talk) 19:56, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

Partly done The referencing still needs work. PJvanMill (talk) 19:35, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done on reflection, further improvements would not really be cleanup work. PJvanMill)talk( 19:58, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

• Karuna Sukka - many urls that need to be turned into inline citations. Less Unless (talk) 21:17, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

•  Done: This was addressed by copy edits performed by User:Andcentra. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:26, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Baybayin - Unscholarly content, too much citation needed tags -- CommanderPhoenix (talk) 03:19, 5 May 2020 (UTC) 11:19, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Note: The Baybayin article presently has no citation needed templates on it. The article does have one "better source needed" template, in its History section. @CommanderPhoenix: Could you perhaps expound upon and provide specific examples regarding your view that the article contains "unscholarly content"? This addition qualification would be be useful. Also, it may be more functional to post your concerns on the article's talk page, where others with an interest in this specific topic are more likely to see what you have to say. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 02:38, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
• Note: Struck the rest of the nomination. The cleanup request is vague, and despite being pinged, the user has not responded to provide more information. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 17:48, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Indian Institute of Engineering Science and Technology, Shibpur. Needs more and better sources as the majority are first-party sources. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 04:57, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Tetrahedron17: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions for the addition of more sources to articles (link). North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:18, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Rashid Askari Hi, hope you are fine. I have added and edited few information in this content. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rashid_Askari I was add his recent pic. And some newspaper column which is published in famous newspaper. All the information i added is correct and there is a source for it. But I saw a notification above his page that is "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page." He is not my close connected person. I know him well because he a famous person in our country. How I can remove this message "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page." from his wiki page. Please remove that message from his wiki page. If you want I will clean up my editing from his wiki page. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mehedi-iu (talk • contribs) 12:49, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Mehedi-iu: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link). Some discussion has occurred at Talk:Rashid Askari regarding a potential conflict of interest, if anyone is interested in pursuing this matter outside of this project. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:48, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Draft:Rakesh Wahi – Per a COI edit request, it appears this person is requesting cleanup on removing promotional content. Also, article has been tagged with need additional citations for verification. {{SUBST:replyto|Can I Log In}}^{PLEASE copy and paste the code to reply}(Talk) 03:38, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

Note: Striking this entry, as COI drafts are not something this project does. PJvanMill (talk) 23:29, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

• Mirza Rida Quli Shari'at-Sanglaji the article requires NPOV-cleanup. I have already removed some most obvious cases and reorganized it, but I think it requires an expert opinion. Less Unless (talk) 22:22, 5 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Less Unless: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link), so striking the entry at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:58, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• William N. Rom - - Sol and Judith Professor of Medicine. This page has Paid Editing & undisclosed payments notice. Clean up is needed, can someone clean this up. -- Andcentra (talk) 03:05, 04 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Andcentra: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link), so striking the entry at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:53, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Thomas Mensah - Ghanaian-American chemical engineer. His page was created with Paid Editing & undisclosed payments. A bit more cleanup is needed. -- Andcentra (talk) 21:05, 03 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Andcentra: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link), so striking the entry at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:58, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Kelvin Davies - - US Researcher. The page has Paid Editing & undisclosed payments. A bit more cleanup is needed. -- Andcentra (talk) 21:05, 03 February 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Got rid of the promotional tone. A Very Purple Ostrich (talk) 18:09, 10 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Andcentra: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link), so striking the entry at this time.

• David J. Love - - US Professor of Engineering. Paid Editing & undisclosed payments. A bit more cleanup is needed. -- Andcentra (talk) 21:05, 03 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Andcentra: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link), so striking the entry at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:58, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Webhelp - a big French company that fits WP:NCORP, but the article reads like an advertising and has at least one undeclared WP:COI contribution. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 13:10, 2 February 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Got rid of the promotional tone. Andcentra (talk) 18:09, 18 February 2020 (UTC)

• Note: @Bbarmadillo: Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions regarding editing to address conflict of interest matters (link). The promotional tone concerns in your post here have been addressed, so striking the entry at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 18:51, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• United States Department of Labor Office of Inspector General - Fairly confident I'm supposed to be at WP:CP, but that seems kinda confusing to edit. The entirety of United States Department of Labor Office of Inspector General seems to be copied from [HERE] and should be removed. However, if that happened, then there would be nothing left because [the first revision] seems to also be copied and there has never been a good version since. Tridwoxi (talk) 02:39, 2 February 2020 (UTC)

 Done Someone turned the article into a redirect. PJvanMill (talk) 19:15, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

• Load-bearing wall - Construction / Architectural element. Article had has only had one citation since 2009, the description contains a direct copy and paste of the leading paragraph (including formatting), and the whole thing probably needs to be given a good looking-over. TheJonyMyster (talk) 04:55, 26 January 2020 (UTC)

Partly done - Added the additional citations requested, but in doing so, discovered a potential copyright issue, which I am now pursuing per WP:DCV. -- WILDSTAR^talk 19:38, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Trimmed and restructured the lead, removing much of the duplication found in the article. -- WILDSTAR^talk 13:55, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

•  Completed. Editors investigating the copyvio deemed the matter to be a backwardscopy, whereby the WP article was copied externally. -- WILDSTAR^talk 13:55, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

• Pariksha Pe Charcha Competition needs to be de-orphanised along with cleanup Shubhi89 (talk) 11:06, 23 January 2020 (UTC)

 Done Could use expansion, but expansion is not cleanup. PJvanMill (talk) 23:09, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

• Călin Georgescu - bare urls in several sections, needs inline citations. --Less Unless (talk) 00:00, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

 Done with WP:Refill, Less Unless. You can also mark articles for automated url expansion into citations putting the {{LR}} template up on top.Guarapiranga (talk) 04:19, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the tool, Guarapiranga. I didn't know about it! --Less Unless (talk) 13:42, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

• Note The article has a list of sources, but still has no inline citations. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 21:03, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• Note: Struck the rest of the above entry. Per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions for the addition of more sources/citations to articles (link). North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 08:59, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

• PNC Cognitio School - private school in India. A lot of self-referencing and promotional language. Possibly should be turned into a draft and pass AfC. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 09:41, 11 August 2019 (UTC)

 Not done Given the apparent non-existence of good sources, I've nominated this article for deletion. PJvanMill (talk) 16:02, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

N Deleted: The article was deleted per this AfD discussion. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 23:06, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

• Jyotirmimamsa—an Indian astronomical work from the 1500s. There's almost no details on the content of the book or what impact it made. Also needs some expert attention. —A garbage person (talk) 16:42, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

• Comment: @A garbage person: Your request would require source research and the addition of sources to the article, but per recent changes to this project, it is no longer accepting submissions for the addition of more sources to articles (link). However, regarding this concern and your request for expert attention, you could try posting at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Astronomy and Wikipedia talk:Noticeboard for India-related topics to solicit potential work on the article. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:13, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

• Abraham Mutholath - Roman Catholic priest. Lead section too long and external links need shortening. Added by Bbarmadillo. PJvanMill)talk( 22:09, 15 July 2020 (UTC)

 Done The lead section and external links have since been cleaned up. PJvanMill)talk( 22:09, 15 July 2020 (UTC)

• Clampi (trojan) - rewrite/context | I've make a series of major edits in an attempt to resolve a resonating issue with "vandalism" (not, AGF) from Youtube fans of Kitboga (streamer) trying to warn people that wp as being used as part of a technical support scam. I've taken courses in technical writing but admittedly this needs some help. I've changed the tense to past tense to reflect the confusion as to with this is either a virus with current potential to cause harm or a historical footnote forshadowing future trojans with ever evolving capabilities. Please absolutely take 20 minutes to read the talk page before commenting. Technophant (talk) 11:56, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

@Technophant This looks quite good actually. It's well-sourced, neutral, and for the most part very readable. I think it's quite clear from the lead that this isn't currently much of a threat. The only improvement that I immediately see is that the second sentence of the lead should be split up into 2 or 3 sentences. Is there any specific problem you need help with? Kind regards from PJvanMill (talk) 19:34, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done — WILDSTAR^talk 05:00, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

• Malappuram district - This article has a lot of cleanup issues. A lot of MoS issues are seen. Kambliyil 03:31, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Note: for the specific cleanup work to be done, see the article's failed good article nomination, points 1 and 4. PJvanMill (talk) 00:25, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Fixed bare URL, reduced number of duplicate links per MOS:DL. -- WILDSTAR^talk 11:37, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Partly done Cleaned up general spelling mistakes and obvious grammar errors, but syntax is still odd in some places - Spellingmistakes, June 30 2020

Removed Requester is overwriting cleanup changes. Article is too unstable to remain listed here. — WILDSTAR^talk 03:56, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

• Zoran Djurovic - a lot of puffery.Less Unless (talk) 21:03, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

Note: I've nominated this article for deletion. PJvanMill (talk) 19:50, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

N Deleted per the discussion at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Zoran Djurovic. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 02:53, 15 July 2020 (UTC)