Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 11

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This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old.

2018 posts

June

Fixed AmericanAir88 (talk) 12:19, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

April

 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:17, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
Comment – The book has received some notable reviews: , (PDF), . According to WP:NBOOK that probably bestows notability, but the WP article should be about the book's influence and should not repeat the book itself. Also, the article could possibly be nominated for deletion because there is no article about the author. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 15:23, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done ...at least in terms of cleaning up he weaknesses noted by User:Bbarmadillo back in April. I alerted the Books Project about the article and some folks there cut down the self-referencing summaries substantially. The article still has lingering notability issues though. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 17:21, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
I also notified AustinIrving that they should not be editing this article and should properly declare COI. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:12, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
X markN Deleted This page has been deleted (not by me) due to it being "Unambiguous advertising or promotion". --LichWizard talk 14:44, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
LichWizard Looks like it has raised from ashes :) -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:26, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
Bbarmadillo So it has :P --LichWizard talk 19:49, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
Bbarmadillo Well, I guess it's been deleted again... --LichWizard talk 14:53, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done I cleaned up the grammar and such, but the article doesn't cite any sources, so I have no idea if it's accurate or not. --LichWizard talk 21:31, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done Cleaned up the duplicated references. --LichWizard talk 18:19, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done Fixed duplicated and bare URLs --LichWizard talk 11:34, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
I think it's a beautiful article! Nina07011960 (talk)
 Done - Tags for "copy edit" and "personal opinion/essay" were placed on 10 April by Matuko (who also commented above). Several editors tackled typos and grammar errors and in my judgment the problem is resolved so I removed that tag. Meanwhile, Matuko (if you read this), please give some examples of how the article looked too much "like a high school essay". Respectfully and professionally, I must disagree because almost all claims are supported by reliable sources and a few minor oversights already have the standard "citation needed" tag. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 19:12, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Thank you. I stand by my issues with the article, and have replied to your comment on my talk page with examples. I don't have a dog in this hunt other than providing readers with a factual and readable article on Mrs. King (as we all want), and if I am alone in this, I'm perfectly fine with that. I used phraseology (i.e. "high school essay") from Wikipedia's guidelines regarding encyclopedic tone and article cleanup and certainly not just to offend. --Matuko (Talk) 23:49, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done, fixed by other editors
 Done Leschnei (talk) 13:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

March

Partly done improved references a bit. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:59, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished the cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:58, 17 March 2018 (UTC)
UPD: Nominated for the deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 11:46, 1 April 2018 (UTC)
X markN Deleted per discussion at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Gerald Murray (Talent manager). North America1000 20:02, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
Partly done the text is OK. There are still too many links at "External links" that should be turned into text references. I did part of the job. A bit more effort is needed. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:15, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished the cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:54, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

February

  • Fixed: Has been addressed by other users, and I performed some follow-up minor edits. North America1000 19:56, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
  • The article is presently in a satisfactory state, and it is also not orphaned at this time. North America1000 02:30, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

January

  • I've checked all the links and they all work.Plum3600 (talk) 21:42, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 03:07, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
Note that Draft:John Warner Smith has already been rejected for article status five times due to lack of notability and shortage of reliable sources. Another review now is likely to lead to the same result. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 22:21, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
  • The article is now in main namespace, and does not appear to require cleanup at this time. North America1000 02:34, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

2017 posts

August

November

Article has been Deleted from an outside person.AmericanAir88 (talk)
Fixed by Derek R Bullamore. North America1000 04:27, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Nb. The article was redirected (by another user) to Banjara, the latter of which does not appear to need improvements. North America1000 03:00, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:12, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

December

 Done

July

  •  Done - Xcuref1endx was probably right about someone close to the organization writing the article. It had way too many unsourced details about the group's inner workings, stuff probably remembered fondly by the group but boring and irrelevant to everyone else. I eliminated just about all that stuff, reduced the article to a factual history, and improved the citations. There are a couple of fairly minor factual statements that I was unable to verify so I left "citation needed" alerts. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 21:03, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

April

March

September

October

2016 posts

December

November

May

August

 Done All Bare Urls fixed AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:40, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

2015 posts

May

  • The article has received many copy edits since this post. May not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 01:48, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
  • I cleaned up the references, no globalization tag presently exists on the article, the article is essentially cleaned-up at this time, and requests for major copy edits are better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:00, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
Partly done: Looks like one had been fixed, but Traffic light still needs improvements. Tinton5 (talk) 20:21, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
I took a look at this article and I don't think that there's much use in cleaning it up until there is some kind of consensus on which source to use for the list (post office vs USGS, for example) and how broadly to define place names (include counties?). Leschnei (talk) 14:06, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

April

  • Most of websites cited in the article are deadlinks. Ayub407talk 06:44, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:23, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
  • A duplicate post for this article exists on the May 2015 section of the main Cleanup page.

March

February

  • The article presently has no bare urls, but still needs clean-up for other reasons. North America1000 03:41, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

January

2014 posts

January

  • Not in a messy state at this time. Source searches are showing the organizations title as titled in the Wikipedia article. North America1000 01:34, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

October

  • Partly done

August

February

  • Dated post; unclear how it's an "unmitigated disaster". North America1000 01:30, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Partly done: I filled in 7 bare references with reFill. More bare urls remain. North America1000 14:44, 25 September 2017 (UTC)

2013 posts

October

  • The page presently has 37 references. I cleaned up the bare urls, and layout is in order at this time. North America1000 01:23, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
  • The stated problems do not exist in the article at this time. North America1000 01:25, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 01:27, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
Added links, attempted cleanup, still requires more citations. jojo@nthony 13:09, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

August

I changed the title to Relationship between education and HIV/AIDS.-- Brainy J ~✿~ (talk) 19:06, 24 August 2013 (UTC)

July

  • The article has received many copy edits since this post. See the page's Revision history for more information. North America1000 01:14, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

April

  • This section presently has many references, and only a couple of citation needed tags at this time. North America1000 01:12, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

May

February

  • Struck "Footnote number 22 needs to be replaced with a more reliable source" above. Appears to have been addressed. North America1000 14:13, 27 September 2017 (UTC)