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The Arbitration Committee has requested a binding, structured community discussion on the article titles "Support for the legalization of abortion" and "Opposition to the legalization of abortion". From commencement, editors should collect systematic evidence of the frequency with which the proposed titles are used in various English-speaking countries, as well as any other material which is relevant to the appropriateness of any proposed title, and present that evidence in an organised, structured and easy to navigate manner. After a period of one month from the commencement of the RFC (on March 23 at 00:00 UTC), comments from the community and a vote will take place. This will be closed by three neutral administrators (HJ Mitchell, Black Kite and EyeSerene), who shall report to ArbCom. The vote's result shall be binding for a period of three years.
At this structured discussion, participants should maintain civility and decorum, and the discussion should remain focused on the topic. The various proposed variants of titles are presented below, each with its own section. In each section, editors are welcome to provide reasoned arguments and appropriate references that support that section's title.
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The two articles under discussion become redirects to Abortion debate. Much of their content is moved to Abortion debate. Articles such as Abortion debate in the United States can be created as appropriate under WP:Summary style.
This section is for discussing the proposed titles only (such as additions and suggestions). This is not for detailing one's preferred option for a title, that discussion will commence on March 23
From a copy-editing standpoint, how about a slight alteration on the last set of names, to "Support for abortion legality" and "Opposition to abortion legality"? For one thing, as Jerzy pointed out the current proposal doesn't take into account that "legalization" means "making something legal", not "supporting its continuing being legal". For another, the current proposal is lengthier. Allens (talk | contribs) 20:11, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
Oh. Another formatting matter. Shouldn't "Other descriptions" be its own section, not under the last set of names? Allens (talk | contribs) 20:14, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
What is going on ... where are my comments and the others that are now gone? I'd like someone to post an explanation of what happened to the discussion and why my comments were deleted.--Djathinkimacowboy 21:24, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
I am in complete agreement that these titles need to be standardized but I am at a loss for why pro-choice, pro-life are unacceptable in the first place. While the terms themselves may convey a POV that does not necessarily mean that they are unusable due to NPOV restrictions.
Ultimately, it seems odd that wikipedia would reject both labels most commonly used in the debate (pro-life/pro-choice) and a professional/scholarly consensus alternative (Abortion-rights movement / Anti-abortion movement) and instead create new terms to describe an existing public debate.Grin20 (talk) 21:52, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
I would like to suggest that we have more than just these two articles. Opposition to the legalization of abortion and Support for the legalization of abortion are both good topics and clearly scoped. They both should have articles. But Right to Life Movement and Pro-life movement are both also notable and well-defined topics, with plenty of material for articles and seemingly much interest in writing about them. They should not simply redirect to Opposition to the legalization of abortion as one does currently, and I'm surprised that Right to Life Movement doesn't seem to ever have existed, I get 1.4 million ghits (your results may differ) and quite a few Wikipedia articles mention it by this name as well. There will be similar organisations and movements linked to the other side too I expect. Andrewa (talk) 02:11, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
*One article - not two - I'm with Owain on this. I think splitting the topic into two articles is wrong. A common objection to the proposed naming pairs is that they are not parallel. That's because the attempt to analyze this issue into two positions obscures its many levels and nuances. This topic cannot be properly presented as two sides of a dispute. Editors who cannot work collaboratively on such an article should not be working on it. Pleas add an option to have a single article covering the issue. Jojalozzo 20:22, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
As an alternative to Pro-life movement and Pro-choice movement, how about simply Pro-life and Pro-choice? This would have the same strengths of the former, chiefly avoiding the dog's breakfast that is the "support/opposition" titles, and would further avoid the pitfall of implying the existence of some unified "movement". --BlueMoonlet (t/c) 19:29, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
Another addition I would like to make is that focusing on the legalization of abortion (or however you want to word it) is much too narrow. Plenty of people are "consistent pro-life", meaning that they oppose abortion, euthanasia, war, capital punishment, etc. Also, plenty of people are opposed to funding of abortion and government support of abortion and would describe themselves as "pro-life" though they do not advocate prohibition. There should be room for a "pro-life" page that encompasses all these things and does not focus so narrowly on the legalization of abortion. Can these points be better represented in the "for/against" items above? --BlueMoonlet (t/c) 19:29, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
My issue with this discussion is that it's not totally clear what is being discussed: it looks like it might be very hard to separate out naming and content. If the article is on that group of people who oppose it being legal to have an abortion, then a case can probably be made for one of the word salad constructions. But if it is about the "pro-life movement", broadly construed, and the article on the pro-life movement is all about abortion and not the other issues which the pro-life advocates claim to also support, by their own arguments it is lending undue weight to only one aspect of the pro-life movement. A similar but less strong argument could perhaps be made regarding the term pro-choice.
I hate to go all wikilawyer, but a "structured discussion on the names of the [...] articles" (as ArbCom has specified) can be interpreted in two ways: perhaps it is a discussion of the best names for the articles concerning the topics strictly defined, or perhaps it is a discussion of the best names for the articles as they currently exist. Either way, the right-on warriors for truth, justice and freedom will find a way of challenging it on this basis. Only unlike me, they'll challenge it after it has concluded rather than just as it is kicking off. —Tom Morris (talk) 09:49, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
This issue will very likely be cited as a model case of the limitations and shortcomings of encyclopaedias in general, and of Wikipedia in particular, when it comes to issues that have complex geographical and historical dimensions. The majority of editors of these articles will likely come from the USA (I myself am writing in Scotland), but the material itself is envisaged as covering a variety of contemporary contexts, and including a good stretch of history in those different contexts going back to the varied forms of legislation passed in different countries. Arbitration can solve (in an ad hoc fashion) the choice of titles, but it does not address the deeper question of how a suitable title can be found that properly covers every country in which there is debate about legislation, together with their different histories. There is no single debate, for which a single title can be found: there are many debates, oriented to different legislative contexts, with varied histories. In practice, the proposed articles are bound to be dominated by the US context, its legal framework, and its history. This is not because of the content, but because of who the editors are likely to be. It would be far preferable to have articles that are geographically, historically, and legally specific. e.g. 'Abortion debates in the USA'. I can imagine a single page that summarises the contents of these specific pages; but I cannot imagine the split between two pages proposed here having an outcome that pays due attention to the different legal contexts in which these debates are conducted. Thelongview (talk) 12:07, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
I agree that the content needs sorting out first. I would propose that the pages should be (without prejeudice to the naming):
Now, some of these may have large sections that deserve a daughter article. The two most obvious in the context of this debate might be the Pro-life movement in the United States and the Pro-choice movement in the United States. If these articles did exist, they should only be about the movement, not about the issues. For instance, it could talk about the major groups, action they take and any variance in position, but should not talk about the acutal issues (that would be in the main article).
Other daughter articles could include single topic issues like Islamic views on abortion (haven't even looked to see if this is an article, it's just an example of the sort of thing that could be).
I think this type of structure is the only way to make sure that the issues stay clearly defined and separate from the complications and inherent POV of national and interest group bias. Any further thoughts? OwainDavies (about)(talk) edited at 17:43, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
I'm not certain of what the structure is supposed to be on this page. So I'm not adding to the many lists above (but someone helpful and clueful is welcome to try to add my suggestion : )
But anyway, it would seem to me that rather than talk about "american bias", why not have United States in the title of each "movement" (United States Pro-life movement; United States Pro-choice movement) for the existing articles (a simple page move); and have another page for International abortion debate movements, with the US movement pages existing there with a concise summary and template:main linking to the pro life and pro choice pages? Leave Abortion debate for the general information, and if necessary, split off by country as needed (something like: Abortion debate in the United States). - jc37 19:22, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
It is said above, and re-iterated, that "abortion is fully legal in essentially the whole northern hemisphere". I'm not quite sure how relevant this is, but if it is relevant, is it true? In UK, for example, abortion remains illegal unless two doctors in good faith decide that the case falls within one of the designated exceptions. This is not often checked - and may be widely disregarded (witness the recent furore about sex-selective abortions in UK). 'Widely available', Yes: 'fully legal', No. A second point - a usage by a particular institution (in their style guide, for example) is not necessarily evidence of NPOV. The UK Guardian may use 'anti-abortion', but it is certainly not NPOV as between the two sides of the debate - should it be balanced by Fox News referring to 'pro-life' (if I'm wrong in suggesting that Fox News would do this, I shall be happy to apologise)? There are topics (and this is one) where truly NPOV terms are hard to come by. Which is NPOV - 'enhanced interrogation' or 'torture'? [no option has been added in the drafting of this paragraph]Twr57 (talk) 21:40, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Thank you for your first and third points. As to your second point, I disagree. I'm not sure if 'in general' qualifies the political neutrality of the 'Guardian' or abortion not being a controversial topic in UK, but (assuming the latter) I think you're wrong. Witness recent press reports about sex-selective abortions, and demonstrations and counter-demonstations outside abortion clinics. At the very least, it is controversial to say that it isn't a controversial topic. The best you can say is that it isn't as hot an issue as in USA. And the fact (if it were a fact) that it isn't a controversial topic wouldn't mean that the Guardian wasn't pushing its side of the argument in its style guide.Twr57 (talk) 16:01, 9 April 2012 (UTC)
There are half a dozen trivial variations on "legality" and "legalization", which seem likely to steal votes away from one another. It's like an election where the choices are:
and the Republican is declared the winner! For the integrity of the process, I would strongly urge that the combined vote total of the various legality/legalization titles be taken into account. -- P.T. Aufrette (talk) 01:42, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
PLEASE READ BEFORE ADDING OPTIONS — I, on the basis of no sort of authority or anything like that, am asking you, dear reader, to help keep this RFC sane by only adding new options to the above list if you, at the very moment you're adding it, believe that the option you are adding is the best one and is the single way this RFC should be resolved. I ask this because I believe that adding options for the sake of covering bases doesn't add anything useful to the process and helps make the whole thing an indigestible wall of text that prevents people from engaging usefully with it. I hope you'll agree. —chaos5023 (talk) 23:58, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Title suggestion I propose asymmetric titles both starting with Abortion for clarity:
However, that still leaves us avoiding the most common, even if biased or euphemistic, labels of "pro-life" and "pro-choice". Obotlig (talk) 23:55, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
Abortion is an important issue. Wikipedia:Edit warring is so so so unimportant; The Arbcom are important people is this debate but they are simply not important. Change perspective - abandon Wikipedia:Edit warring; accept WP:Fluidity and if the world does end I will apologise. Tom Pippens (talk) 20:43, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
After one month from the commencement of the RFC (March 23), members of the community are invited to comment on the various proposals here, giving reasons as to why they support their preferred argument. This discussion is not a vote, and as per all discussions, comments will be weighed based on strength of argument.
-- Perey (talk) 10:07, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
| Before voting, please read the arguments regarding the options above. They were refined by extensive collaborative analysis over the course of a month and may raise points that aren't immediately obvious simply from considering the titles. In particular, please read the section General points of policy relevant to all options carefully, rather than evaluating this RFC as if the question it is answering were "how should we label the two sides of the abortion debate?" |
| It has been proposed for closing admins to use the Borda count system as a guide in determining the consensus. To facilitate this, please rank the options in order of preference. If you do not rank all options, and Borda count is used, remaining Borda count points may be distributed equally between the remaining options. |
The comment phase being now open, here is a numbered chart of the options under consideration at the time of opening, so that we can refer to them by number for brevity:
—chaos5023 (talk) 02:17, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
Please note: the official voting/feedback phase of this RFC ended at the end of April 23rd. —chaos5023 (talk) 00:20, 24 April 2012 (UTC)
I have done the raw tallies at Wikipedia_talk:Requests_for_comment/Abortion_article_titles#Tally. Any questions, I can be contacted by email. You can check my work by looking at the spreadsheet linked there. Homunq (talk) 20:43, 24 April 2012 (UTC)
| The below section is only for the closing admins, Black Kite, EyeSerene, and HJ Mitchell to discuss and report a consensus of this RFC. |
| Option | Strong support | Support | Neutral | Oppose | Strong oppose | Ranking (where preference was expressed/can be unambiguously inferred) | |||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1st | 2nd | 3rd | 4th | 5th | 6th | 7th | 8th | 9th | 10th | 11th | 12th | 13th | 14th | ||||||
| 1 | 15 | 31 | 1 | 15 | 8 | 26 | 10 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 7 | ||||
| 2 | 3 | 13 | 2 | 15 | 4 | 17 | 12 | 9 | 6 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | ||
| 3 | 1 | 4 | 1 | 18 | 4 | 5 | 12 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 2 | ||
| 4 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 13 | 3 | 1 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 1 | |||
| 5 | 2 | 8 | 1 | 15 | 3 | 5 | 12 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | |||
| 6 | 1 | 7 | 1 | 16 | 3 | 6 | 10 | 7 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | ||||
| 7 | 3 | 1 | 13 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | |||
| 8 | 16 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 2 | 3 | ||||||
| 9 | 1 | 1 | 15 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 2 | 5 | 1 | ||||||
| 10 | 3 | 2 | 14 | 4 | 2 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 1 | 1 | ||||
| 11 | 14 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 2 | |||||
| 12 | 4 | 16 | 1 | 15 | 2 | 15 | 9 | 3 | 6 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 6 | ||
| 13 | 1 | 1 | 15 | 6 | 6 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 1 | ||||||
| 14 | 3 | 1 | 13 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 7 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 1 | |
| 1+4+12 | 1 | 4 | |||||||||||||||||
| 1+12 | 3 | ||||||||||||||||||
| The voting phase attracted comments expressing some form of preference from 160 distinct respondents. Of these, nine comments were unable to be fully parsed into the above tabular format. | |||||||||||||||||||
| Option | Ranked only | Traditional only | Combined |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 624 | 329 | 953 |
| 2 | 646 | -43 | 603 |
| 3 | 371 | -241 | 130 |
| 4 | 350 | -183 | 167 |
| 5 | 413 | -113 | 300 |
| 6 | 443 | -156 | 287 |
| 7 | 352 | -200 | 152 |
| 8 | 240 | -284 | -44 |
| 9 | 332 | -256 | 76 |
| 10 | 393 | -214 | 179 |
| 11 | 230 | -271 | -41 |
| 12 | 497 | 44 | 541 |
| 13 | 200 | -285 | -85 |
| 14 | 267 | -170 | 97 |
| 1+4+12 | 0 | 71 | 71 |
| 1+12 | 0 | 42 | 42 |
I've added some scoring in the collapsed table fwiw. Ranked only just looks at the Ranking section, assigning 1st=14 points, 2nd=13, 3rd=12 etc (similar to Borda). Traditional only is an attempt to score the rest of the table by assigning Strong support=15 points, Support=14 (same as ranked 1st), Oppose=-14, Strong oppose=-15. Combined is the two together. Although I don't believe in rigidly scoring Wikipedia discussions in this way, I found the tabulation etc a useful exercise because if nothing else it compelled me to carefully read each comment :) EyeSerenetalk 11:32, 3 May 2012 (UTC) edited 11:56, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
Now I've had a chance to think it through for a while, I'm going to try to base my contribution towards this closure on what I feel to be three key points:
1 Policy, mainly WP:TITLE. There appears to be some confusion over whether the RfC applies to the two articles as originally written (which were about the US pro/anti abortion movements) or as they now stand (widened to include the global debate). The point is repeatedly made that in the former case only option 1 might be policy-compliant (per WP:COMMONNAME, self-identification etc), whereas in the latter case option 1 is not compatible with a world-wide viewpoint (per WP:NPOV, US-centricism etc). Depending on the version of the article preferred, WP:TITLE can be honestly invoked to support either case and thus I feel neither case is compelling. It seems to me that because the purpose of the RfC is to decide the article titles it will by definition also set their scope. Therefore we should be more concerned with trying to find titles or a title structure that would unambiguously define future article scope, rather than trying to match the existing or former content to a title. Whatever the outcome I believe some editing, refactoring, merging and/or splitting will be inevitable to bring title and scope into alignment.
2 Discussion etc. What I've taken from the discussion and voting is the level of division over the terms "Pro-life" and "Pro-choice" (option 1), which tend to be firmly favoured by those who prefer them and equally firmly objected to by those who don't. There is warm support for "Abortion rights" and "Anti-abortion" (option 2), but although generally less vehement there is also some notable opposition by those who dislike the semantics. A complete refactoring of the subject (option 12) also attracts significant support and seems to be an acceptable alternative for many who've preferred one of the more contentious options. Of these top three, option 2 attracts the broadest range of support and the least firm opposition. I concur with Black Kite that the combination options (1+4+12 etc) are interesting and may have suffered from being introduced late in the day. However, due to the support for some of their constituent options I believe they may still be worthy of consideration if they offer a way forward.
3 Polarisation. As has been pointed out elsewhere, it's perhaps difficult for a non-US editor to fully appreciate the depth of feeling on either side of the abortion debate (which appears to be far more robust in the US than the rest of the world). However, Wikipedia has dealt with many equally divisive subjects and I see no reason why we can't try to provide a framework that allows editors from either side to work together - if not happily, then at least productively. I suspect that one reason the titles and scope of the articles have changed over time is that there was no clear structure that enabled editors to understand where their contributions did, or didn't, fit.
Given the above, I'm leaning towards recommending something along the lines of a refactor of the topic (option 12) with an over-arching global-viewpoint parent article and clear summary-style sub-topics one of which could be option 1 or 2 and deal with the US debate only (possibly as a single article or possibly not). I should stress though that these are only my initial thoughts and are of course subject to the input of my fellow closers :) EyeSerenetalk 12:13, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
This is just note to say that I have now read through the wall of text (that was fun!) and I'll be posting some initial thoughts here later today, and probably refining them over the coming days. I apologise for the delay. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 18:20, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
It is worth noting, briefly, that much of this strength of feeling originates in the United States, and that the debates surrounding abortion seem to be much more prevalent in the United States. It is of note particularly because at least some participants express the view that some of the proposed titles are only widely used in the United States. There are other strong arguments against option one, despite it being the most popular option in the vote. For example, many point out that the term "pro-life" (both within and without the United States) is not used exclusively in the context of abortion and may refer, among other things, to an opposition to capital punishment; others suggest that the terms "pro-choice" and "pro-life" are relatively recent labels, and do not reflect the history of the debate; still others point out that the terms, although commonly used, were chosen by the respective 'camps' to disparage the other. I concentrate so heavily on option 1 because the most supported options seem to boil down to "option 1" or "something other than option 1". Arguments in favour of option 1 (or in opposition to something other than option 1) that I thought were particularly well-made include the view that "wrinkles" (to borrow BlueMoonlet's term) can be described in the article, that it avoids the term "rights", and that it is the most common label used by the members of these movements.
It is my opinion that structuring this RfC as a vote was a bad idea, and bringing in a system that is obscure at best on Wikipedia for an RfC such as this was a terrible idea. If there is one thing a controversial RfC doesn't need, it's a disagreement over how to count votes. Not least because the entire purpose of a Request for Comment is to facilitate discussion, not voting. I get the impression from the talk page and from many comments above that a significant portion of the participants were unaware that the Borda method was the suggested method of voting or didn't fully understand what that meant. However, using that count for the time being, the six highest-rated options and the only ones to gain over 1,000 points (NB, I am relying on the numbers at Wikipedia_talk:Requests_for_comment/Abortion_article_titles#Tally because I confess to not fully understanding the counting method and to being far better with words than I ever was with numbers) are options 1, 2, 12, 6, 5, and 10. Interestingly, the last three are far more similar to each other than any of the first three. Also interesting is EyeSerene's first table, which shows that option one is both the most supported and the most opposed. By all but one of the different tallies for different methods, option one comes out on top (though marginally, and marginally behind option two in the dissenting tally).
I'm going to make a suggestion that will meet with displeasure from many of the participants, perhaps my fellow closers, and possibly make ArbCom wish they had appointed a yes man, and I apologise for making this suggestion after keeping everybody waiting for so long. It is is my opinion that no clear consensus, sufficient that all parties can accept its legitimacy even if they disagree with it, has emerged from this RfC (bolding that bit for those more interested in my conclusion than my working). It is also my opinion that only such a strong consensus can lay this argument to rest. So my suggestion is that we hold another, narrower RfC, with the aim of determining whether we should have one article for the entire debate (along the lines of option 12) or separate articles for the opposing views, and if we are to have separate articles, whether they should be titled in accordance with option 1, option 2, or some variation of options 5, 6, and 10. If this suggestion is taken up, I would implore participants not to treat it as a vote, but to set aside their own views and engage in intelligent debate about which format and which title is the most appropriate. I would also suggest that the same three admins, having now become more familiar with this debate and the nuanced arguments surrounding it than certainly I ever wanted to be, should be the ones to close this second phase of the RfC. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 06:18, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
If I've correctly understood your comment, you are not recommending a new RfC but simply an extension to clarify consensus around the leading options and associated variants. While I feel this is probably the right way to go, I have some concerns about requesting a second round when participants have already expended a great deal of effort on the subject. However, if editors are willing to invest additional time I'm happy to make myself available for as long as necessary. On a related point, I think if some editors are reluctant to participate further we should take account of applicable comments made during the phase already concluded. I'm keen to avoid any impression of requiring editors to keep repeating themselves in discussion after discussion.
If we do this I agree that voting should be discouraged. I understand why it was suggested previously and appreciate that many respondents set out their reasoning as well as casting their votes, but personally I found the reasoning to be the more informative part of the process. I have no objection to traditional support/oppose-type !voting as long as it's accompanied by explanatory comments.
As well as closing the second round, are you suggesting that we three frame the questions? Between us we seem to have a good idea of where we'd like clarification from the community, so that might be a sensible way forward.
Finally, it would be nice to conclude this within a reasonable time period... :)
I do have some further thoughts but I'll wait for BK's response before posting anything more that may be irrelevant or unnecessary. Best, EyeSerenetalk 12:44, 1 June 2012 (UTC)
Re BK's last point, unless I've missed something I've only read one comment that expresses a wish for new closers. I appreciate the frustration behind that comment, but would hope editors can understand and forgive us when real-world priorities intrude. Unless more editors express their dissatisfaction I don't really see a need to take it further, but if we do then I'm happy to abide by the outcome :) EyeSerenetalk 08:18, 7 June 2012 (UTC)